Posts Tagged ‘alice in wonderland’

Comic Run 12-18-09

Friday, December 18th, 2009

The Complete Alice in Wonderland #1
Hey, you know what book I read recently? What book makes this whole story completely dull for me to read now? Yeah. Alice in Wonderland. Why did I bother picking this up?

Forgetless #1
Twitter. Completely unnecessary in this story. Also, the time jumping was not the best thought out thing ever. However, the story itself has left s many holes in it and I’m curious enough that I really want to find out more. The story of a girl who for some reason is hired to kill a guy and her friend who may also be her supervisor and, well, there’s a lot of holes.

Incarnate #3
Well, it was a fun battle. The story had no point to it, there was no conclusion and it shifted genres again for the final issue. The plot was pretty well non-existent and, while it seemed to be trying to set up some dramatic end of the world epicness and survival of the species stuff (And the species was pretty much undefined) with absolutely no payoff. I don’t know what to make of it besides learning not to pick up anything written by someone who is related to someone famous again. Or, at least, not if it costs more than a normal comic.

Incorruptible #1
A super-villain disappears and goes straight. It’s got a bit of Incognito in there, but it’s not grabbing me quite the same as Incognito did. I mean, he sold out his people and burned down all of his money, which his girlfriend (“Jailbait”) for some reason hasn’t moved. Some of this story just doesn’t sit well, but we’ll see.

Marvelous Land of Oz #2
I like that they’re focusing on Pumpkinhead, though why they bothered with making Jack a character when they were just going to ignore him for the latter of the issue is a bit of a mystery. Still, Pumpkinhead and Scarecrow seem to be hitting it off pretty well and it looks to be developing into something pretty cute.

Nomad #4
I love this character. I like how everything ended up and I like that she’s on good terms with the Young Avengers. I like that she finally met with Cap. I like that, despite tragedy, she’s still able to move on with her life without becoming a ball of angst. I like that it’s alluded that her alternate universe self is helping her out. I like that Spider-girl is inexplicably in the background of the last panel despite her being written out of continuity with OMD. I don’t really like that the YA came out of nowhere and left the same way, nor do I particularly like that she’s exposed her secret identity because those two plot threads came out of nowhere and seemed to leave in much the same fashion, but otherwise it was fun!

Underground #4
Wonderful how the environmentalism can still permeate through the fact that you’re being chased by men with guns. Still, it’s an interesting enough look at them running away, I suppose, and the dialogue is relatively fun. It’s just… environmentally conscious. And that bothers me.

Comic Minute:

In case you don’t remember issue 1 of Nomad, here’s a refresher.

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Day 17 – Hearts!

Tuesday, November 17th, 2009

I’ve just left Wonderland and am pondering where Alice will wake up and how she’ll discover what her middle wish was, when and all sorts of other things I usually have planned out beforehand but this time opted not to because it’s a Wonderland story and it’s better if it all gets made up with crazy as I go along. Also, there was a huge tone shift and now Alice is back in reality and going to finally let the horror of the room of hearts settle on her. I think right after she tries to yell at Cat. They can talk proper later on in the chapter.

From Chapter 9

When Alice looked up from her curtsy, there was a book in front of her. She had a feeling she was gradually appearing in the room, but she couldn’t really be certain of that as her eyes were solidly upon the book, kept on a table with a glass cover over it that she felt she probably wasn’t meant to touch. The whole thing seemed a little off, and as she rose, she quickly looked around to find out just where she was.

She determined very quickly that this was definitely the room of hearts. It was a room where the walls were not only lined, but seem to actually be made of hearts. Not the nice hearts that the queen wore or any sort of derivative of it that she might have assumed was some sort of representation of hearts in Wonderland. Instead, the walls moved, beating together and, while the glass that held them back and in place was glassed over so that she couldn’t see the details, they looked like they were quite literal hearts. When she looked down, the floor was the same, only this time tinted in red and looking almost like they were sitting in blood instead of still beating in the ice.

Her brain started to shut down at the horror of it, but she hardly had the time for that. There was a door on one side of the room made of regular wood, unlike everything else in the room. She needed to hide, she knew, and she looked madly around for something that might hide her that wasn’t made out of the hearts of Wonderland.

There was a small desk near her that she went to and hid under, though she found out very quickly that she was wrong about it as well. The exterior was only stained to look like wood. Inside, it was a loose pack of hearts floating within it, shifting and moving, letting her see through the small gaps in them as someone entered followed by several more people. All of them seemed rather familiar.

[Header image by Shaz]

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Day 16 – Breaking Point

Monday, November 16th, 2009

While this chapter also featured Alice throwing fridges, the excerpt for today is a bit more of an important one. See, this is the point where Alice properly gives up, decides that it’s time to stop trying to make sense of anything at all and just go with it because obviously Wonderland hates her anyway. Also, cake!

From Chapter 7

No one also seemed to mind that there were two fully armed knights that waged battle into their kitchen, swords flailing wildly as the two met each other blow for blow. The Red Knight, unfortunately, seemed to be considerably more practiced and had quite the advantage on the White Knight. Still, the White Knight continued to fight quite hard and Alice wished there was something she could do to help.

She looked around for something that she might be able to throw at the Red Knight, hoping that might throw him off and give the White Knight a better chance. She knew that she would never manage to hit him from this distance, though, her throwing arm quite weak as the boys would never allow her to play their sports with them. She had played more feminine games with the other girls instead and now regretted it, knowing that she would not be able to help. Not that there was anything within arm’s reach to throw anyway. Instead what she could under the table was a very small cake sitting there with the words “Eat me” on it.

“Oh, I remember you,” she said, her eyes glaring down at the small cake. She leaned out from under the table and looked up on top of it. There, sitting just in front of the potatoes was a small basket of mushrooms with another little sign on them, this time stating “From the Caterpillar.” She looked between the two of them and shook her head. Wonderland was doing this to her on purpose.

[Header image by Shaz]

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Day 10 – Hello Alice

Tuesday, November 10th, 2009

The time has come. That plot bunny is perfect for this month really, and now I can write it out. It’s time to get working on the prep work for the first book of The Looking Glass Saga. Or maybe Chronicles, but for now, Saga is what I had written down first. Let’s get to characters.

Alice Liddell
Alice just started at Lucena Academy, sent there because she had gone to Wonderland half a year before and driven her parents nearly mad with her incessant talk of her time there. She took this as they told her to take it: a chance to further her education and continue to learn to be a brilliant, polite young girl. She does, however, have a feeling her talk of Wonderland has caused them to send her here and is making an effort to not be so forthright with the tale any longer.

She is young, outgoing and not afraid to point out when someone is wrong or make a correction where she thinks it is necessary, but does so in the politest way she can manage. She is level headed and determined, working hard to make her parents proud and ready to continue to do her very best at anything that she attempts. Granted, it doesn’t always work out for the best, but her intentions are usually good.

Adrianna Case
Quite possibly the most beautiful girl in school, Adrianna certainly doesn’t let on that she is aware of that or anything at all. She has been sent to school for a good education at the same place as her seven brothers, all of them who remain at the school keeping a keen eye out for their little sister, who is quite prone to getting herself into unusual situations due to who she is.

Adrianna is an honest, caring and dim young girl. While she is beautiful, she has trouble understanding that there could ever be anything but good intentions when other people approach her and she is quite naive. While she does work hard, she is also a little slow to understand. She memorizes facts, but does not understand how to use them in any constructive way.

Cat
A somewhat aloof older figure in the school, he appears to only associate with Alice, it seems, and does not obey much of the dress code or anything else in the school. Those who have seen him say they usually find him looking to find a comfortable spot in the sun for a nap rather than attending any classes or homework. Some believe that he may not even go to this school, saying that he only appeared on campus this year and no one knows his name beyond Alice referring to him as “Cat.”

What he is, however, is the Cheshire Cat, come to bring Alice news of Wonderland and bring her back when it suits whatever his own motives may be. In all actuality, though, he is quite happy being a human at this school and doesn’t know why the children are so stressed. He certainly isn’t.

Adrainna’s Brothers
Adrianna has seven older brothers, all of them attending the same school as she is for the moment. They do not currently all have names and I am still trying to work out who is in what year, when they would graduate and all of that messy extra stuff that comes with creating families of more than two children. Well, even then, come to think of it. But there are triplets in there and they are mischievous. Possibly a pair of twins in there as well that are both perfect little angels. That would be five of them… we’ll see.

Their core function of the story, though, is to keep an eye on their little sister and make sure she isn’t getting into trouble again. She does have a bad habit of not recognizing obvious scams and being a little too sensitive. As well as that, they have their own issues and problems so that they can be well rounded characters as well.

Arthur Dragon
Doesn’t show up for a while, but he’s been a little frozen in stone for a while. When he wakes up, he is slow to pick up on how things work in the new world and his understanding that he’s not King and doesn’t have the power to do what he wants for the good of the mission doesn’t apply anymore.

He does turn into a good guy once he gets smacked around a little, though, but he does keep some of the arrogance. He’s also a bit of an unwilling hussy, kissing whoever Alice tells him to kiss because his kiss breaks curses. He’s not all that happy about this development.

Peter
Peter is the first refugee that Alice pulled out of the Looking Glass. He was on the run, trying not to get himself killed and scared for his life as well as carrying a lot of guilt over the people he left behind in the mean time. Not knowing what else to do, he ran from Neverland looking for a way out and found Alice, who pulled him out, but was unable to keep him at Lucena Academy.

He also returns at some point, though I don’t know how or what happens just yet. But he’ll be a hell of a lot happier than he was before, so everything should work out pretty nicely. Maybe a little rivalry between him and Arthur or something of the like. It would be nice to see the two of them try to show up one another.

And that’s more characters than are appearing in the book I’m working on right now. It’s being conceived as a series, so I’m working on the planning as if it’s going to be a series as well. Peter and Arthur, they aren’t getting into the story though they might be alluded to.

So this first one, Alice has been sent to Lucena and then Cat finds her and pushes her into a mirror. She’s supposed to try and save Wonderland, or just to deliver something to the White King, and fails. She goes back to her world with the gift of a book that she’s supposed to keep safe and not read.

Alice, of course, reads it and horrible things happen. And then more bad stuff happens and then the series is properly set up for all sorts of more things. Really.

And now I need to spend the rest of the evening looking for random stuff to throw into the story because, dammit, it’s Wonderland and Nanowrimo. I take that as license to have utter insanity happen. That, and I’m going to throw a fridge at a character at long last!

Oh, and I guess I should note that the looks and uniforms I have aren’t entirely accurate. I just couldn’t find a jumper. Alice and Adrianna are 12 at the start of this. They get the blue blazer when they get to the high school area in a couple years.

School uniform colours: Blue and grey. It’s the only time I’m having uniforms, I think, so I’m going to try and do a little consistency here. Just a little. But she’s still getting the black headband with boy.

Who knows, I might be able to start writing this thing tonight. Wish me luck!

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Dammit Plot Bunny

Wednesday, October 14th, 2009

As always seems to happen when I’m waiting for Nanowrimo to get here, I have a plot bunny. It’s an idea for a series and something that I’ve touched on before.

Alice in Wonderland.

For some reason, I’m coming up with ideas on how to make it a whole series about Alice trying to free Wonderland. Wonderland has been plunged into darkness and is starting to claim other worlds. The white rabbit comes to plead for her help and Alice goes, but fails to save Wonderland in book one. What she does manage to do, however, is learn that the dark force behind Wonderland moved into Neverland. She leaves as they’re taking it over and takes with her their ability to open their boarders into other realms. Too late for Neverland now, but when she leaves, she takes their ability to expand into her world any longer.

Book two not only does she realize that she did this, but she meets the first refugee. Peter Pan ran away from Neverland. She tries to hide him and he pleads with her to come back with him and save his home. This fails, as does her attempt to hide her at the school and he’s sent away into foster care until they can locate his parents. Which they won’t be able to and he is soon enough out of their care, but vanished for the time being. That or he’ll become her flying cat and she’ll be utterly unable to break that curse.

She’ll also encounter Arthur, who will be able to assimilate into school with her thanks to Snow White due to that subplot.  And others will probably show up throughout the series. meanwhile, Alice is going to slowly grow magical and more powerful, probably fall in love once or twice if I can figure out how to do romance non-cheesy and eventually take on the big bad of the series.

It all takes place at a boarding school. Alice was sent off because of Wonderland in the first place. Borrowing from the Wizard of Oz sequel a little, she’s sent away because she became obsessed with Wonderland upon her return and her parents couldn’t take it. So they sent her away and she returns home on occasion, though not often as now her parents are travelling constantly and she will often not see them for years on end. She suspects that they may have separated and neglected to tell her too. They are awfully busy with work, after all.

Or something. We’ll plot this thing out proper once November ends and I have a little Christmas time inspiration.

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The Marvelification of Disney – Sword in the Stone

Tuesday, September 15th, 2009

And now to try and tie a few things together!

Arthur wasn’t sure what had happened. He thought he was supposed to be dead from that final battle with Morgana centuries ago, but when he woke up there was none of that. Lost and confused, he started to wander out into the snow to find out where he was and what was going on. He was taken in by a couple in the woods who informed him that he’d been asleep for centuries. Somehow he came back much younger than when he had died and he set out to find out if others from his time had been reborn as he had.

In his travels, he learned that only Merlin was left, still undying and his last link with the past he had come from. He was not yet used to the ways of this new world and sought him out, though encountered a strange being called the Cheshire Cat. He was a strange creature that spoke in riddles and seemed quite out of place in this modern world, but he bid Arthur a bit of help. Arthur eventually agreed to try kill the Dark Queen of Wonderland if he ever ended up there and was promptly dropped into a rabbit hole when he left.

Trapped in the twisted world of Wonderland, Arthur was bound by his word to at least attempt to save the land. There he was captured and imprisoned with a boy named Michael who appeared too young to be any trouble to anyone. From Michael he learned that the Dark Ace of Wonderland was Wendy, his sister, who had taken a liking to Arthur already. Wendy summoned the two of them to her and Arthur managed to trick her into letting him leave and return one day when he was powerful enough to rule alongside her, careful to never promise to come back and marry her. She gave him the ability to pass through the mirrors and bid him luck in leaving Wonderland, letting Michael go along with him as a part of the bargain. He was free for one week, then they would be coming after him to bring him back again.

Michael brought him back to their hideout and introduced him to the remains of Wonderland and Neverland. While he tried to convince Michael to come with him to find a way out, Michael insisted that he needed to stay behind and instead gave him free pick of whatever he needed. He took a pouch containing three vials and a sword, though Michael warned him that the pouch came from the mermaids and they were not to be trusted, so test the vials before using them.

On his search for an exit, he encountered many of the dark army and a strange fairy, wandering about looking lost and broken, like her mind had been shattered. He kept calling him Peter and finally gave him the power to free Wendy so it could all go back to normal. His kiss would break a maiden’s spell. And then she left, not realizing that she had picked the wrong guy.

In one encounter, he thought they were finally going to catch him again. This was when he met Alice, a very young girl who was very powerful. She saved him and was finally able to bring him back to reality and even managed to recognize the curse on the vials, saying that they would kill any human who used them that didn’t absolutely need them. She asked, mostly as a joke, that he repay her for all her help by finding her an ally and he agreed.

He found Alice an ally and got rid of the first vial in finding Snow White asleep. Alice noted that she was cursed and Alice wasn’t very good with breaking curses. Remembering what the fairy had said, tried kissing her. Apparently his kiss really did break the curse. After hearing her story, he tried to give her one of the vials, then left. He learned from Alice that she became a useful ally.

Continuing his search for Merlin, he came across the story of another young girl cursed to sleep. He thought nothing of it until he heard more about her, then thought perhaps she could use another one of the vials. He went to her, broke the spell with his kiss and gave her the vial so that she could help herself from then on.

He encountered another fairy on his travels, a refugee from Neverland, and she begged him to check up on the girl she helped, telling him her story. When he did, he encountered Cinderella and gave her the last vial before leaving. In repayment for helping her, the fairy showed him to Merlin.

Merlin was glad he’d finally shown up and sent him on a new quest. He’d already gained Excalibur, which had been lost in Wonderland, but now he had to assemble the new knights of the round table. They would be various people scattered across the land that he’d have to find quickly for Morgana was going to return and they had to be ready. He found one in Beast, though he is still looking for more to join his table.

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The Marvelification of Disney – Snow White

Saturday, September 12th, 2009

Snow White was an heiress and a rather dim one at that. Her stepmother was constantly overshadowed by the young girl, her beauty and innocence and naiveté. Her stepmother grew jealous and, when Mr. White died only to find that his fortune had been left to his daughter when she turned 18, grew angry. Her stepmother wanted the money for herself and to no longer be overshadowed by the younger woman, so when Snow went away to school she set her plan in motion.

Her step mother’s plan was to kill her, but she was not very good at it. Whether it was her conscience or the fact that she really had no idea how to kill someone, it was never very clear, but she had to try.

First, she sent her a pair of white gloves with razors in them that would cut her wrists if one of the seven boys who followed her around everywhere hadn’t taken them from her first. She thought it was strange to put decoration on the inside and was cross that they had taken her gift.

The next was a packet of cookies, but one of her boys pointed out as she was about to eat one that they smelled like peanut butter. And then reminded her that she was deathly allergic to peanut butter. And then took them away so she wouldn’t eat them.

When the vitamins came that were clearly glowing. Her boys were away on a trip this time, something the school had arranged especially for the boys which left the girls alone at school for a week until their big trip happened the next week. Snow took some of the pills, falling into a near coma.

When next she awoke, there was a boy standing over her, looking at her like she was an idiot. He shook his head and told her that she was an idiot and gave her a gift to make sure she stopped that in the form of a small vial. She drank it and became hyper intelligent, but the boy who saved her was gone.

While the boys were happy to have the fair maiden back, she was quite changed. She wasn’t an idiot any longer, which was a nice change since they didn’t particularly like helping her with her homework as it was. She understood things and gained a different sort of ambition. She wanted to do good and help others as she had been helped, but first, she sent back the pills to her stepmother with a warning to not try anything like that again.

Snow was turning into a gadget geek with nothing to test with. She eventually encountered Alice, a younger girl at the school, and became an ally in keeping the things on the other side of the mirrors while she was at school and subsequently gained test subjects of a very unusual sort, but Snow knew she had a larger calling. When she graduated at the end of the year, she inherited her father’s fortune and started a whole new venture to do good.

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The Marvelification of Disney – Alice in Wonderland

Monday, September 7th, 2009

Continuing in the daily series until I get it out of my system, Alice in Wonderland. Who Disney may no longer have, I’ll have to check. Or, you know, just keep having fun without research.

Alice found the land of Wonderland quite by accident when she was younger. Back then, it was a lovely place of dreams and, though the Queen seemed cruel, she left a happy child. Her parents thought it was nothing more than her imagination running away with her and didn’t believe the stories.

It wasn’t until she was older and she thought that it might have really been only a dream that she discovered the looking glass. It was on a dare from some of the other girls at her boarding school that she snuck into the attic of their dorms and found the looking glass, as if she were destined to. The white rabbit was there, jittery as he waited and informed her she was late before taking her through the looking glass.

Wonderland was a vastly changed place. The Queen had been overthrown and been replaced with an even greater evil. Horrible things had happened and those who remained were twisted and changed. She was given gifts and magic to try and stop the evil, but Alice couldn’t even get close to it. In the end, she was sent back, too many lost already, and watched over the portals between Wonderland and reality, ready to beat back the threat when it came, learning what she could of magic on this side from merlin and other sorcerers so that she could be strong enough.

She remained an ambitious girl in school nonetheless. She desired balance between watching over the mysterious barrier between the two worlds and, in doing so, she discovered there were others at her school with little gifts that were willing to help her.

Of those from Wonderland who came across the barrier, the Cheshire Cat was most troubling, though she could do nothing about him. He went to the Academy, claiming that they would likely come through where they would be the least noticed and remained very helpful, but there was something in his motives that she simply didn’t trust.

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The Marvelification of Disney

Wednesday, September 2nd, 2009

Okay, so after everyone went nuts over the potential Disneyfication of Marvel from the buy out, some things and people made me start thinking of what would happen the other way around. More specifically, Ellis’ “Astonishing X-Men: Doe-Eyed Meat Geyser” announcement, joke though it was. Unfortunately.

But now I have the image of a Disney version of X-Men in my head. So here it is, for the horror of all. Please forgive the writing, it’s quite stream of consciousness.

Bagheera runs the institute of anthropomorphic creatures, formally simple animals that have gained more sentience than they should. While some such as Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck have managed to go out into the world and exist peacefully, most of them are still feared and they are brought to the academy to learn to come to terms with themselves and learn how to exist to help the humans until they are no longer afraid.

Among the students is young Bambi, his mother not quite as evolved as he was and killed by hunters before his eyes. Though he seems well adjusted, he holds a deep routed hatred for humans for what they’ve done. He and Thumper are often getting into trouble, which is how they encountered their third.

There’s also the young prince Simba, much more optimistic about humans and recently transferred in from Africa. He knows few others here, though wants his pride to communicate more with the humans and his uncle Scar assured him this was the best place for him to learn until he was quite old enough to take command of the pride.

Among the teachers is Baloo, Iago and the Chesire Cat, though the Cat always seems to have his own agenda at the school. Bagheera keeps as close an eye as she can, but the Cat is there under specific conditions as a spy for higher powers to make sure the school does not get out of hand.

They find a child left on their grounds, abandoned, that Bagheera takes personal responsibility for under the urgings of Cat. The child is named Mowgli and he is raised as a part of the school, though remains firmly outcast in the student body, particularly butting heads with Bambi.

The main trouble with the school is Bagheera’s old rival, Shere Khan, who believes that the animals should have equal rights already. He is always looking for defectors. Though the teachers at the academy do their best to keep the students out of the fight, it doesn’t always work out so nicely.

And no, you can’t have any of what I was on. It’s mine. MINE!

I may have to keep doing these. Crackfic is fun!

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