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IAT 222 – This is going to be weird

Tuesday, January 22nd, 2008

So… gotta come up with an idea. Here’s an idea I’m pitching to my team, since the best they’ve come up with is modelling a car in Halo.

Transmundane: A Transmedia Story

Deliverable Components
The Media:

  1. A blog site with video of the first post with the main character
  2. A comic site with the introduction arc of ten pages
  3. A site talking about the Transmundane project

The Production Package

  1. Full plot point summaries of both the comic and the video blog
  2. Timing of when each should go into production
  3. Contingency plans for if things go wrong schedule-wise
  4. The site instructions for each of the three sites

The Video Blog Package

  1. Full character profile of the main character
  2. Profiles of non-appearing minor characters
  3. Outlines of the first twenty episodes
  4. Full overarching plot summary, complete with major plot points
  5. Setting requirements and restrictions
  6. Blog-specific requirements

The Comic Package

  1. Full character profiles of all major characters and several minor
  2. Multiple setting descriptions for various mindscapes and the collective subconscious
  3. Full plotline
  4. Corallites for various instances of thing happening to be implemented at Production’s word
  5. Site requirements

The Video Blog Characters
Brooke Hudson is a lovely young woman who has decided to keep up a blog for the new year as a manageable resolution. Shy, uncertain, she only recently realized that blogger existed and a friend is showing her how to post videos. Graduating from high school this year, she is starting to notice things wrong with her, like random blackouts where she can’t remember and that she can’t recall her dreams anymore. She doesn’t think much of this, rather concerned with midterms, finals and provincials instead.

She is growing up and does not want to be associated with childish things, and so does not watch or read anything geeky or that might be considered as such.

The Comic Characters

Brooke Hudson

  • New player in the game and only a part time player, which is a bit of a pain
  • Resourceful, though only really lucid within her own scape
  • Discovering the limitless expanses of the subconscious and the railways of the collective
  • Believes what she is told
  • Still sensitive to reality

Sage

  • Been there the longest and has become something of a leader
  • Patient and kind, though does what’s necessary
  • Knows many of the tricks and trains in the ways of protecting the subconscious

Paige

  • Redheaded peppy and impulsive girl who isn’t that new, but has been the newest for a while
  • Strong arms her way into things
  • Slightly paranoid of everything when she isn’t being peppy

The Plots

Video

  • Open to the intro of her talking about her goal to blog for a year, talk about how she’s new, just a quick intro, and how she thought it was cool seeing other people so she wanted to do it too
  • End of month one, Brooke comes to the realization that she can’t dream anymore and has an odd meandering rant about it
  • She had a good valentine’s day because she’s in a relationship and her boyfriend is so romantic, but not in the cheesy way, etc, etc.
  • Three weeks after the dreams rant, she talks about the original post she was going to make, but she zoned out for the camera for a good half hour. Says she must be tired from provincials.
  • Late March, at the end of a post if anyone’s ever been terrified from a nightmare and not been able to remember what’s got them so scared that they can’t get back to sleep
  • May she notices one of the crueller girls at school has become quite a bit nicer than usual
  • August she notices that she’s blacking out more and more. Late in the month she starts having trouble with her boyfriend. This is a bad start to the new school year in college where she was accepted.
  • September, mid. Her boyfriend dumps her for another girl at his own school and she takes a bit of time off before telling her audience. She decides that this will be a fresh start, though is clearly upset.
  • Tries to immerse herself in her homework, life and trying to find a part time job during the school year, though it’s getting very hard for her to concentrate. And she’s starting to think something’s wrong in her head, though never says so.
  • She is hired in November for the Christmas rush and she works hard to try and balance everything.
  • Last post of the year, she’s excited about going to a new years party after all the exams and Christmas. Maybe she’ll meet someone new.

Comic

  • Brooke is discovered and introduced to the world, how it works and what they do and why, even coming with them to help out in some of the trouble they get into. Character development, world building and forming a bit of formula as well as introducing the bad guys.
  • Late March, she gets cocky and gets in way over her head. Reportedly, she’s lucky that she can snap back to reality and learns that there is fatality in this universe. Sage reveals that he has a false hand/arm.
  • April, she wanders on her own and talks to one of the bad guys, learning their motivation and discovering that they’re altering scapes and trying to help. She switches sides, acting peaceably and independently, thoroughly manipulated.
  • Late July she fixes her boyfriend’s scape. A little while after she confronts the bad guys and they don’t believe that she can escape here. Sage comes out of nowhere and talks to her, straightening out what happened. She switches back sides.
  • Embarrassed, she learns that the others have all done something like that before, but they never really understood like she did the ramifications. They switched back because the other side had a lot of backstabbing.
  • It becomes clear that the bad guys are planning something, but no one’s really sure what. They just retreat too easily and Brooke is left behind which she feels good and bad about. Good because she can feel that she doesn’t have much time to spend here right now and bad because she feels the need to prove herself to the rest of them still.
  • New years eve she gets pulled into the verse for the final battle already underway on the collective which is going a little funny in areas where the population is drunk and the rules aren’t working right. There’s a big thing at the end, scene ends and the first season ends.
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OMG! It’s a plot!

Tuesday, October 30th, 2007

Plot time! White Mice. I have characters, now I need plot.

So, it’s the start of a new year and the start of reopening some very old dormitories. The first night is a party, complete with meeting new people and a little drinking for good measure. Not that everyone managed to get to get to all of that. Eight of them went to sleep early.

Late that night after the party had wound down and everyone had gone to sleep, five of them met up in the attic, some aware of it and others more surprised that they ended up there. Not that they were left to mull in their confusion long as strange and horrific creatures came to attack them and they were forced to act, lashing out at them although, as they vanish, they realize that something is amiss.

This is when the final three appear from the middle of the room. Dawn, Di and Ezra are not so much apologetic, Di and Ezra actually laughing more than anything else, while Dawn gets right down to business. Now that they all know each other’s secrets, they can get down to the matter of the hunters, a large organized group with the intent of hunting them down and killing anyone with powers, that are coming after them in a matter of minutes.

They manage to successfully detain them and send them away, trapping several things inside an igloo in front of the building. Dawn tagged it with something before going to sleep herself. Thus, the White Mice, a prank group was born. No one else realized it until the morning, when they found that everyone had been admiring the handiwork of the igloo. They all rather liked the idea of pulling a few more pranks around campus.

All was going all right at first, finding that the hunters were actually still on campus trying to catch them and pulling pranks coinciding with sabotaging the surveillance on the eight of them. Dawn and Don ended up orchestrating all of this, giving one another code names so that “The Dons” wasn’t kept. Not that it worked, but they tried.

Dawn was taken out of commission early on by some of the hunters, removing her charm and unleashing her, leaving her unapproachable and unavailable for consultation. Angry at the attack on Dawn, they went looking for them to find that they were ready for them. They managed to escape, taking Di to a small place pointed out by Ezra for treatment. Tori went back for Dawn, making a new charm for her and dragging her out of it.

Needing a way out, Gabriel stepped up and found them an escape and a place to hide out for a little while until everyone had recovered. This escape was an abandoned house that they live in for a while, doing house-y type things while some of them late at night located places with the hunters and attacked, taking out weapon stores and surveillance and such.

And now’s where I get cryptic because it’s climax material, but I’m adding it because I want a plot in full to go back to.

They find the big central HQ and they go and attack it, thinking if they take it out the whole thing will collapse. So they go and they fight and someone dies (OMG! Who woulda thought I’d kill off a character?!) and then they go back home and Dawn tells them that they didn’t take out central and no one believes her until they’re attacked on the way back. So Dawn’s not dead. She sees the future, she can avoid death for a good while, neh?

They return to school, walk in on their own funeral and decide to split up, since it’s best for all of them. They’ve become the notorious 8 or 7 and everything is ended with all of them going off on new lives.

And that’s all. 2 more days. 2 MORE DAYS!

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OMG Characters!

Sunday, October 28th, 2007

Okay, so Nano is just around the corner. And though I’ve said nothing about what my story is about, I’m going into my character spiel because some of them are really well developed and some have no development at all and I just need to go through them all. Worked well for me last year. Might as well give it a shot this time around.

Donovan “Don” Mitchell
Don
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Powers: Summons a spear, has increased agility, strength and stamina
History:
Don grew up the only child in a small family. His parents had wanted a second, so treated him like the experimental child, placing rules and regulations on him to keep him out of trouble and generally trying to keep him a good responsible child. Unfortunate that he started bending the rules around that and found loopholes that helped loosen his parents up a little and made them let up on the overabundant restrictions. Especially after he managed to break into the house when he forgot his key because of their last effort to get him into the house on time: by locking the house and not letting him in.

He didn’t mention to his parents what had happened that night to make him late, not believing it himself just yet. He had been walking home when a group of older teens surrounded him. Besides wanting to hurt him, he didn’t really know what they wanted. Outnumbered, he wasn’t sure what to do, but decided to at least try to put up a fight. When they started beating on him, he lashed out and found that he was suddenly holding a spear that had come out of nowhere. He used it, beating them off with the flat of the blade end of it and pushed them back and off, running out in the confusion.

The spear disappeared once he was out of danger, his heart pounding a little less and he was in the gardens behind his house, looking himself over and trying to figure out how hurt he was and how he was going to explain to his parents. Strangely, he wasn’t hurt nearly as bad as he thought he should have been, though he was locked out. His window, however, was still open and he had questions left to ask about earlier.

Rather than deny the existence of the spear, he tried to summon it again. For an hour. When it didn’t appear, he started trying to climb the side of the house up the grate. He got quite high, but when he reached for the window, he fell. He flailed, needing something to break his fall and keep him from falling on his head, the spear was there again in his hand, embedding into the ground. He was never quite sure how he managed to land on his feet, but he was happy for the spear. Once he caught his breath, it was time to try something stupid.

With a running jump, he vaulted himself into his window, using the spear as leverage. It worked and the spear, upon looking back outside, had vanished again. Confused though he was, he decided to just sleep on it.

From high school, he became a very laid back student, maintaining a C+ – B average throughout and getting into sports. He was not popular, though still maintained many friends and a couple girlfriends here and there. It was one of his girlfriend’s brothers that introduced him to the wide world of computer programming behind gaming and he had discovered a passion and direction outside of sports, which were clearly not about to give him any free rides into any good schools.

In his final two years, he took up more math and computer science classes and did quite well. Grades improving in the last two years, especially with having dropped quite a few of the sports teams he was on (Mostly as a second stringer anyway, so he didn’t particularly mind) he managed to get his grades just high enough to get into a school with a decent technology program.

The spear appeared again several more times afterwards and, though he never quite got used to making it come when he wanted, he was getting the hang of using it when it did show up.

Notes:His control is minimal, and he kind of takes things as they come rather than worry about things that might happen eventually.

He also has a romantic interest. I can’t remember her name, but they’ve been going out for about 6 months as of the start of the story.

Dawn Ngera
Dawn
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Powers: Can see the future, needs an inhibitor so she doesn’t get lost in time and remains mentally in the present
History:
Dawn doesn’t discuss her past, because her past is her own business and she has no need to live there any longer than she has to. Needless to say, it wasn’t a hell of a lot of fun. Instead, she likes to focus on other people’s past, and what they had shared instead.

While none of them will ever recount the tale honestly, Dawn had been living on the streets when Di and Ezra Thrice came by. They had simply walked past and she had stopped them, telling them of things that would soon be causing them all problems. There were people that were after all of them. Well, her specifically, but they would soon be coming after everyone and they would all need to be warned. Not warned. They would need to be recruited. Knowing how the twins would react to all this, she made it sound more like a challenge. The pair of them were clearly bored and if they helped her, she would get them good stable living arrangements, entertainment, lots of people and they would never have to settle down. They would be on the move soon enough.

She gained their trust slowly, but surely enough they grew to trust her and followed her into conning a good number of people into fabricating educational histories for all of them. She now appeared to have several years at a community college and was transferring into university. The twins were fresh out of high school. The plan was set, the pieces were in motion, now all that was needed was the other side to show up and the games could begin.

Notes: I love Dawnie. She’s fun. And she’s wearing a black wig and brown contacts to hide white hair and silver eyes.

Torana “Tori” Celeb
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Age: Unknown
Gender: Female
Powers: Creates charmed items with magic in them. And she appears to randomly turn into an elf.
History:
Torana, Tori as she’s more commonly known, doesn’t particularly like to talk about her past, though people on the campus know her. She has been attending the school for many years now, dabbling in just about everything and very good at what she tries. She has enough experience now to hold a double, perhaps even a triple major if she would ever declare one, but she never does, instead taking odd jobs on campus and cutting down on her number of classes.

Most of her research, little known to the rest of the campus, leans largely toward the classification of all the people who have magic in this dimension and trying to understand how that works in the context of alternate dimensions. No one, however, questions her on what her real motives at the school are since she’s been there for so long. Instead, she goes out and enjoys the social life regardless of midterms or finals on campus.

Her magic she keeps largely to herself, knowing that it is generally forbidden among the people. She doesn’t use it at all, though, except for her own purposes. In this way, she has never been caught or suspected, though some are starting to find it a little odd that despite how long she seems to have been studying there, she still doesn’t look over 20.

Notes: Her secrets won’t be revealed in this book. Also, fashion misfit. Which makes her fun.

Jin Chen
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Age: 21
Gender: Male
Powers: Controls rocks and minerals.
History:
His parents were strict-ish growing up. Both of them Chinese-Canadians, they believed that Jin should grow up with more freedom than they had, but not by much. He had always been pushed very hard to get straight As, learn both Cantonese and Mandarin and become a doctor. That was what his parents had wanted for him and therefore his line of work had long ago been chosen for him.

In school, however, he had discovered a liking for geology of all things. And cooking. His parents did their best to appear supportive of it, though it took them a very long while to realize that he was gravitating away from being a doctor and wanting to branch out into something else. Doctor wasn’t really what he wanted to do, but he would try anyway to make them happy. And his parents slowly stopped pressuring him to become a doctor, deciding instead that he could do what he wanted as long as it required a good education and was guaranteed to pay very well. Post secondary allowed him to branch out into a lot of strange subjects and he’s dabbling.

He did not discover his powers until first year. He was hanging out outside, joking around with Don about the Philosophy class they had just gotten out of. Smething about how in an alternate universe, they would all have powers. Jin joked about how he could just wave his hand and girls would fall for him. In doing this, he waved his hand and the ground developed a lump in it, a girl tripping over it as she walked. While Don and he laughed, Jin knew he had done something and started trying it on his own time, gradually realizing he could manipulate the earth, sand, salt and other earth, rocks and minerals.

Notes: I have to fix him. Lots.

Ciara “Cici” Foley
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Age: 20
Gender: Female
Powers: Controls silvery dust
History:
Ciara was raised largely by her mother as her father left when she was young, unable to deal with her grandparents. Her family had a long standing agreement with another family, the Foleys, to protect them while they got their hands dirty, both families in a very long standing business of information. Selling and using it was their speciality. Ciara’s family provided the muscle. Therefore, when Ciara manifested her abilities at a very young age, she was immediately sent to her grandparents for training.

She couldn’t remember that summer at all. It was like it hadn’t even happened. All she knew was that she had been indited into the family business and, while she wasn’t ready to work yet nor did she understand what it was they did, she was useful now. Her mother, however, didn’t like it and wanted to find a way out of the family.

Over the next year, her mother married a man from the Foley family and she got an older brother, Gabriel. He seemed to remember her better than she remembered him, saying that they had met last summer at their grandparents, then taking it all back and instead trying to act more like a brother to her. She didn’t really understand it, though grew used to him though he seemed strangely distant much of the time. Like he knew something he shouldn’t. Still, she was young and didn’t understand what was happening.

The pair of them were sent off to another completely forgotten summer at their grandparents and then soon after that Ciara stopped seeing them all together. They all moved clear across the country, well away from them and hopefully away from their eyes. Ciara started learning to develop her powers on her own at this time, discovering that the dust listened to her and could tell her things that it heard as well. She took up eaves dropping and started to learn things about how her parents were trying to get out of the family and the family business but it was going to be nearly impossible because they had just robbed them of an entire generation of power.

Ciara had no idea what it meant and decided instead to focus on her own exploits. Like studying. High school pressures were starting to wane on her and her brother was off to University soon, so he would not be around much longer to ask things of. He had started opening up a little more, but he still didn’t seem to have too many answers, not at all interested in what his grandparents were up to or why they had been moving.

When school for her rolled around, she was put directly into the English program due to her grades in high school. Since then, she’s been content to keep to herself, though always seems to know a hell of a lot more than she should.

Notes: She’s the one who has written this book in continuity. That’s why it misses all the stuff that happens in Wipe. Baha.

Gabriel “Gabe” Foley
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Age: 23
Gender: Male
Powers: Teleports using mirrors.
History:
His mother died in child birth, which left him being raised by his father alone. His dad, while caring, was still rather cold and distant. Like he didn’t want to get too close. Still, Gabriel did his best to make him happy, studying hard so that his father would be proud of him and trying to do well in everything he did because when he did well, his father seemed to become warmer toward him.

One night, tired, he had gotten up from his bed to go visit his father. Forgetting to open his door, he walked into it or, more precisely, into the mirror and walked out the other side in his father’s bedroom. His father, surprised though not entirely shocked, said nothing about it and treated it as if it was a normal incident that they were not to talk about outside this house.

That summer he was sent to his grandparent’s house, though he could tell his father did not want him to go. There he was introduced to the family business. They dealt in information and he would too, especially since he was someone with abilities. Only one was born per generation in the entire family and he would be brought into the business early. And so he began learning his abilities and how to use them well. So important his grandparents thought they were that they arranged for him to have tiny mirrors surgically implanted behind his ears, though he was too young for that yet.

When he came home, he shared everything with his father, including the fact that he understood this was all to be kept a secret. He returned the next year, and a few years after, starting to wonder as he grew older just what it was they were training him to do. He knew, but he didn’t really understand it. And then he saw Ciara, a little girl they were training intensely for combat regardless of her health and ability. When he asked and protested this, they explained that this was the role of her family. She was being trained to protect him at a word and she was going to be their gift to him.

From there on, he only pretended to enjoy himself and absorb everything, but he was a little disgusted at what was going on. He told his father all this when he got back and he assured Gabriel that everything was going to be all right if they could get a few things settled.

His father married Ciara’s mother later that year. He did his best to keep an eye out for her, but wasn’t sure what to do. She couldn’t remember anything that had happened over the summer at all. He felt awkward around her, knowing that she was being given to him this next summer somehow. That summer, he found out what they had meant. She was trained as a sleeper and they gave him the password to make her switch between normal and agent.

When they moved, he felt better, though still awkward around his sister. The family as a whole decided to not mention any of it to Ciara and Gabriel did his best to do that, hiding his abilities from her as well. Still, he was happier when he went away to school. Protective of her as he had become, he didn’t really know what to do around her anymore. He tried, but that knowledge was still haunting him.

Notes: I send him to Australia. In every iteration. His hair looks dorky, I really should have found something better.

Diamond “Di” Malaya Thrice
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Age: 19
Gender: Female
Powers: Illusionist
History:
Twin sister to Ezra, she is younger by a few minutes but more than makes up for it in her own way. The pair of them were abandoned by their mother at a very young age, left at home on their own with her never returning. Their mother’s influence had left both of them distrustful of adults and they made their way into the streets to fend for themselves.

They knew they had powers but never knew that such a thing was unusual. Di became very good at making illusions of herself, as well as making herself invisible so that she could take food from stands and run away with it for herself and her brother. Gradually they joined a group of other homeless children and she became one of their two best thieves, stealing enough food for everyone to eat as well as hiding them when bad people came by.

When her brother and herself were offered a better home away from all this, they accepted. Their powers had become known and certain people could find need for their kind of children. Di wondered what it was like to be a princess in a house, so they accepted. Once there, they were taught many things, like how to read, shoot a gun, math, use weapons and generally keep people in line. In exchange, they got to play as much as they wanted and watch TV and eat regularly. It was fun.

Then the work came. Once they were ready, they were brought along as backup to collect protection money and introduced to the people. They were quick to learn the ropes of intimidation and soon were insisting that they could do it on their own without people watching them. They had done everything else on their own up to this point, after all. As a joke, they were permitted to go in on their own once, and in the one act they were deemed the terror twins.

The man in the shop recounted seeing demons and ghosts of the past, running screaming from the shop to their driver pleading with him that he would get the money and do anything they wanted from now on. Anything. When asked what they did, the twins merely said that they were having fun and they didn’t know what they did that was so great. They had barely even gotten to the fun part yet.

It was on their thirteenth birthday, or rather their proclaimed one, that they decided to make a break for it, not at all appreciating that they were now being referred to as the “Terror Twins” and wanting to kill anyone who called them that in an affectionate manner. And so, on their thirteenth birthday, they slaughtered everyone at the party and vanished.

Several years later, Dawn pulled them aside and promised them some excitement from their rather dull current existence. As well as the promise of other people with powers. They were starting to learn not to kill the people who made them mad so they figured they could mingle with the smart kids. Maybe. Might as well give it a shot, anyway.

Notes: No one will know when you vanish and Wipe steps in. No one. BAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Malachite Ezra Thrice
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Age: 19
Gender: Male
Powers: Hypnotic voice
History:
When the pair of them started stealing things, Ezra shone in a different manner than his sister. He discovered that adults would do what he said, so he started convincing people to give him money rather than go through the trouble of pickpocketing. He acted largely as a distraction, however, commanding people not to pay attention to the theft as it was happening and everyone obeying him.

He and his sister were the best team and he thought that perhaps they should make something more of themselves. That was when they got the better offer. They both agreed, Ezra because he was curious about what a house was like.

You know what, see Di’s history. They’re pretty much the same, really.

Notes: Anyone who’s been paying attention knows what happens to him already.

Aaand to be continued as I need to keep filling this thing out. Seriously, this is the core cast. All protagonists. I still gotta make proper antagonists before Thursday.

EDIT: And done. More or less.

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Another Crazy Story Idea

Tuesday, February 27th, 2007

Once again, for school. It’s all fun and has murder in it. But a little background on the project. We all have to do a 2 – 5 minute narrative video project. Now, this idea has about a 3% chance of being implemented, so take this as you will, but I still think it would be really cool if a bunch of groups got together and came up with something a little longer than 5 minutes. So this is split up into segments for each group to be assigned to.

Introducing…

  • Intro Adrian and Shavir, roommates
  • Adrian’s girlfriend is dead and Shavir wants him to stop being depressed about it already
  • Shavir goes out
  • Adrian encounters his dead girlfriend, who explains that her death was the result of demons
  • She enlists him as a demon hunter
  • He accepts because it means he gets to be with her

The Hard Work

  • Adrian talks about his job, killing all them demons all over the place
  • More of a montage of fight sequences, various deaths of demons
    • Demon deaths play a role in a later segment here
  • It’s hard, but anything to be with Layla again
  • He worries if he completes this mission of hers if she’ll leave him

Deaths on Campus – Detective Avalon

  • Introduce the detective
  • He’s investigating a series of deaths surrounding the college
  • Young men and one young woman, possibly unrelated, have been dying
  • The cases are all so vastly different
    • Shots of the deaths, poses of the dead similar to the dead demon poses
  • There seems to be nothing connecting them
  • Goes off to interview another student who knew one of the dead guys

Deaths on Campus – The Interview

  • One student leaves
  • Detective has no time for an introspection as the next student comes in
  • Shavir and him talk about potential enemies and people who would want to get people
  • Mentions that Adrian is on his list to talk to as well
  • Shavir mentions Layla’s death and that it might not be good for him to hear about death right now
  • Shavir leaves, Detective Avalon pondering over the interview
  • He realizes that this is useless and he’s really getting absolutely no leads on the matter
  • Fade out him alone in the interrogation room

A Puzzling Day

  • Shavir greets a rather happy and transformed Adrian who is actually going out today
  • Notes how much better he’s doing now that he’s accepted Layla’s dead
  • Heads over to talk to the detective
    • First aid course is in session along the way
  • Leaves the detective office, curious about the case
  • Slips in to see the evidence
  • Figures out the connection between the victims
  • Realizes he’s next

A Few Months Earlier

  • Shavir and Layla head out to a club, him to meet up with his girlfriend of the time, her on her own
  • Layla and Adrian are on a “break” for midterms
  • Shavir’s girlfriend calls and stands him up
  • Layla starts hitting on him
  • He turns her down
  • She leaves, a drunk, and gets hit by a semi

The Last Mission

  • Layla tells him that there’s just one more that he needs to take out
  • Adrian ponders whether or not he wants to because she might leave him
  • Layla gives a sappy speech about everything being okay
  • Adrian agrees, heads out and finds the monster
  • He finds and stabs at the creature once before the cops take him down
  • Adrian , confused, yells at them to let him go
  • He looks to Layla to help, but she’s laughing
  • He gets hit and goes unconscious

A Crack in the Case

  • The detective finds Shavir in his office rifling through his stuff boots him out
  • Tells Shavir not to tell anyone and doesn’t let Shavir interrupt
  • Thinks on it a moment, then heads back out, walking, to catch up with Shavir
  • Maybe the kid figured out something he didn’t
  • Goes out and sees Shavir standing petrified, Adrian looking at him with something in his hand
  • Detective calls for immediate backup as Adrian lunges forward and stabs Shavir
  • He takes down Adrian, help arriving in the form of other students who knock him out
  • Shavir is quickly reached by paramedics and will live

Now all I need is eight groups. And some sleep because, dammit, it’s almost midnight.

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Notes for Later

Monday, January 8th, 2007

Once upon a time I wrote a story called Darkling, a novella length fic that was on a computer that then crashed. I plan on rewriting it and getting a notebook for it and rebranding it to its new name. While it’s probably a bad idea to put it on the Internet, here be the notes for Darkling, which is due to become Sometimes in Fog.

  • World where some people have powers but most do not. Those who do can easily find one another because those with the ability set up mental networks to catch those with other powers and bring them all together to breif one another on what’s happening and who they can tell stuff to and who they can’t.
  • There are a set number of available abilities that people can have. Telepathic (human/animal), telekenetic, elemental, seer. When they start to discover they can do something, they either specialize in one of the afore mentioned or they stretch themselves so thin that their powers wear out prematurely.
  • There other powers people can have that are related to control of people and spirits, but these are generally considered darker abilities and contribute to certain aspects of chaos that most would rather avoid completely.
  • Rinnai, the main character, is oddly mature for sixteen, though fully still just a teenager and more than ready to angst over just about anything that comes her way. She’s also insanely powerful, able to wield all of the separate abilities and the chosen one.
  • The chosen one comes around whenever the world is about to go to shit. When things get really bad, they are sacrificed so that the world normalizes again.
  • Rinnai is the daughter of an alchoholic mother who has no idea who Rinnai’s father is and no intention of finding out. She seems to care about her daughter more in passing than anything else, preferring to just live her own life and let her daughter do the same now that she’s old enough.
  • Her best friend, Mackenzie, works in the same video store as her, though Mackenzie’s parents run the place. She portrays herself as a Wiccan more because she likes the witch style and personal than because of the religion, but she is fine with doing a little practise of it at her leisure.
  • Emory is Rinnai’s partner when they have to go out and police the guys who are trying to cause chaos, havoc and generally expose the people with powers to the rest of the world. I can’t remember offhand what Emory can do, though it was non-offensive and I think he was a seer. He’s in his mid to late twenties and acts as a bit of an older brother figure to Rinnai, though depends on her for these little missions.
  • The story starts off with one of said missions, Emory calling Rinnai in for back up and catching someone they know and whose name I’ve forgotten digging up bodies in a grave yard. They dispose of him quickly, but he mentions that the time is coming for things to change
  • There is mention in the news of strange people with strange abilities seeming to pop up, though this is mostly downplayed and kept to the conspiracy theorists with little credibility. Still, people are beginning to stir because these reports are becoming more pervasive and are making their way into regular conversation.
  • The other side of thinking, the people who want to make them public and practicing the controlling arts and such are beginning to act more aggessively and oddly, more forceful.
  • Rinnai decides eventually to cut her boyfriend loose, thinking their relationship only casual anyway and not linking how anti “freak” he is in light of how common the special powers people are becoming now in regular news.
  • Rinnai talks to her cat, Magdelena aka Lena, a lot and her cat talks back with some good advice from an animal perspective, though essentially stays out of the way of her work
  • Meeting happens at the coffee shop announcing that they need to find the chosen one person because if the sacrifice doesn’t happen soon, some horrible stuff will happen. Rinnai tries not to panic over the fact that her allies are looking to kill her. It als becomes apparent that her enemies also want her dead before the sacrifice ceremony so that they can stop it from happening and essentially win at last.
  • A large event happens elsewhere, making national news and being played over and over of a scene where a man burst open a water pipe and used it and a fire hydrant to stop a living wall of flame from hitting an oil tanker. Attention focused on the water man as the enemy, saying he had been put into custody for questioning, ect. ect.
  • Warning put out that the dark side is trying to draw the light out into public battles and they all need to be on high alert.
  • A ghost comes after Lira in her home, oddly, and tries to take her out. With the aid of her cat’s knowledge of how they banish ghosts in the animal kingdom, she managed to get rid of it but not before her mother returns home in a drunken stupor.
  • She shows up late at Emory’s apartment looking for a place to crash, beaten and in no mood to talk about it. She refuses to go home at first, Emory dealing with her for a while before she finally goes home to confront her mother, who won’t look at her anymore.
  • Ghosts hit the school cafeteria. They start a food fight, a few people retaliating while most duck for cover. When the doors are discovered locked, panic ensues amidst the chaos and Rinnai manages to discretely take out the causing ghosts despite Mackenzie being with her the entire time.
  • Mackenzie is strangely absent from work and she finds out that the girl is in the hospital. Rinnai goes to her, not wanting to go home anyway, and discovers that she was severely beaten by a group of anti-freak people who were trying to preemptively get rid of all of them. She is barely conscious and not focusing as Rinnai talks to her, Rinnai vowing to take her revenge. Mackenzie says something cryptic like a final goodbye and to do something else.
  • She goes after her ex-boyfriend who was a part of the attack on her friend, finding him drunk at a friend’s apartment and barely coherent. With the mindset to beat the living shit out of him, she gets surprised and knocked out, wakes up and ends up escaping out the window.
  • Attempting to get the hell home, feeling dizzy from the smacks to the head and someone comes up behind her with a white van and chloroform. KIDNAPPED! OH NOES!
  • Same guy from before wakes her up and roughly demands that she tell him everything she knows about the location of the chosen one, since everyone is looking for “him” (because everyone thinks it’s a guy) and they had a leak that someone around there knew who it was. They know he hasn’t died yet, so it’s only a matter of time before they corner the person and they want the person first.
  • She is in a warehouse full of zombies and reacting negatively to the chloroform, developing a high fever and barely consious when help finally arrives. She managed to get herself part of the way out, though does not unstrap herself from the chair and ends up collapsing at the door, leaving someone else to take her out of there.
  • She wakes up in the hospital with Emory looking over her, telling her that it was all right and the rest of htem were going to take care of things while she got some rest, but it was not going to be long before they butt heads. He tells her it’s coming only a few days from now and they were getting ready and she was free to not be there if she was not up to it.
  • Rinnai leaves the hospital shortly after and goes to wander around the forest late at night to a nice spot on the bridge to stare at the water. Someone else is there, looking up at the sky and pays no heed until it gets chilly and he gives her his coat without saying a word, then smiles at her and walks away. Rinnai knows what she’s going to try and do, and what she will eventually have to do.
  • Skip to school, she is wearing the jacket again and has to go to detention. Sighing, she uses her powers and breaks the hell out, going through a window and laughing as she leaves. She hesitates, but cannot head back home again remembering the painful morning where her mother wouldn’t look at her or speak to her and simply goes to the fight, ridiculously staged on a street and just beginning.
  • Zombies, ghosts and powers fight. She uses only telekinesis for a while, then decides to end it completely by performing something that came to her that night and Mackenzie’s words echoing in her head again, and she puts an end to the whole goddamn thing, as well as putting a stop to all the control based magic things.
  • Epilogue in the form of Rinnai’s funeral circa the agic people. They found a spot in the forest with a statue of her that was not there before, and here they read the words she left behind for everyone read by Mackenzie, who was one of them all along but a part of a different group in the same town/city.

THE END

Now, lets see if I ever actually get around to writing it again. It’s a total Mary Sue, but it’s a fun one.

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