With the evil scene behind me and the sickness over I’ve come to a stunning realization. I have no idea who these characters are. They all have no personality. This is what happens when I write while sick. All tell, no show, no character development. I’m going by the old versions of them now, from back when I was planning because that’s all I know. It’s okay, I can fix everything on the rewrite.
Current Word Count: 39767
From Chapter 8
“I feel bad for all of us,” Morgan said. “We’ve all had to deal with this crap for far too long. Tonight, we’re going to start making sure we don’t have to deal with it anymore. We’re going to go in and finally start taking our lives back from these assholes and we are going to be free of whatever the crap they think they’re doing. And we’ll steal their wallets while we’re at it.”
“Really?” Jayde asked, eyebrow raised. “Steal their wallets?”
“Are you saying they don’t deserve to get their wallets stolen? After everything they’ve done to us and everything we’ve been put through, don’t you think we deserve a little something back for all of our suffering and misery?”
“Um… okay,” Jayde said, shrugging. She really didn’t have much else to say to it. “You’re the one going in there. Just don’t get caught.”
[Header image by Shaz]
Tags: nanowrimo, raven project
